tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8068413911239606579.post4356734874357410506..comments2019-09-07T01:17:01.258-04:00Comments on Gamish Designer - Adventures in Game Design: Critical!: Go Westerly - IntroductionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00271253447979460916noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8068413911239606579.post-61516386980313524212011-06-21T13:24:09.063-04:002011-06-21T13:24:09.063-04:00I agree, Jonathan - in much the same way as Bulldo...I agree, Jonathan - in much the same way as Bulldogs! was critiqued for starting off with what the game was <i>not</i>, I find that this intro is defining the game as an antithesis of other fantasy games rather than for what it is, and probably managing to insult your target audience in the process.<br /><br />I don't know as much about the game as others, I'm sure, but I urge you to Mikael Anderssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705410929085245128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8068413911239606579.post-30356321000039085662011-06-21T10:14:55.762-04:002011-06-21T10:14:55.762-04:00Thanks for the feedback. That's the kind of s...Thanks for the feedback. That's the kind of stuff I was hoping to avoid. Maybe doing a character introduction would be a lot better.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00271253447979460916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8068413911239606579.post-19405449207356430252011-06-21T09:52:37.668-04:002011-06-21T09:52:37.668-04:00I'm a bit put off by the beginning of the intr...I'm a bit put off by the beginning of the introduction, and here's my problem with it...<br /><br />It seems to deride other fantasy games/worlds while then going on to describe things that are part and parcel of every fantasy world I've ever seen - and it describes them as if they are new and unique to Critical. Now I *know* Critical is a different kind of game, and that it's a Comethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10356000644344353447noreply@blogger.com